Talk:Ravedeath, 1972
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![]() | Ravedeath, 1972 was nominated as a Music good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (March 9, 2014). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated. |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ravedeath, 1972/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: LazyBastardGuy (talk · contribs) 16:36, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
I am sorry, but the article fails the review process at this time.
- Lead paragraph is woefully short and understative of the article's contents. We cannot review what is not there, and there is even a recent cleanup template to this effect; the article has existed in this form for nearly two months.
- Article suffers from organizational issues. Critical reactions & interpretations are used in place of actual information given by the artist himself (e.g. in "Sound and structure" instead of using references to the composer's own words and interviews, it is almost entirely made of opinions that should be placed in the Reception section).
- Overall length leaves information wanting.
I encourage you to correct the above issues and try again. Good luck!
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